Sawyer Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 I am doing this for a friends web site. I am pretty much done but I would like some comments on the composition as it was kind of thrown together & I am not too thrilled with it. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Nelson Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 Hmm, interesting! My eyes seem to jump around a lot, like I'm looking for the focal point (or just 'the point') but can't find it. The view seems too cramped, so maybe it would be good to show more of the top. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffalo Bills Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 Sawyer, I would have to agree with Tim. My eye seems to travel all around the image with no real focal point. What type of website is it, if you don't mind me asking? Maybe take out an item or make one of them the focal point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sawyer Posted February 22, 2005 Author Share Posted February 22, 2005 Yeah I wanted the dna sequence to attract attention but it's just getting lost. BB the web site is a blog on genetic engineering. He said he is interested and really scared of it. So that is the motivation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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