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[vizwhiz]

hi There

 

Vizards

 

here is a current project, hopefully done (This Time i Think, maybe soon)

i finally got the background and foreground Tonite after waiting for 2 weeks

 

of course

 

The Client is leaving Town within 36 hours etc

so, jumping Thru some hoops = business as usual

 

any comments suggestions Ideas greatly appreciated

 

Thanks

 

Randy

[IC]

Hi Randy

Any chance of getting some light into the building?

If you're not using GI, you could fake it. Just looks a bit false at the moment.

 

Good lighting match.

[ipeaguda]

I agree with IC, it`s too dark inside the building.

I`d also add some shine or something to the roof, it looks flat... maybe it needs something else...

Good luck!

[Tim Nelson]

Looking good Randy. I like the natural landscape look you've got going on.

 

I agree about the windows. Try to lighten them up some more.

[alexg]

Very nice foreground, Randy

Background blends well too..... you take the pics on site?

 

For the building...

 

Put some glass on the building, maybe?

And give some raytrace shadow for the building.

 

It lacks reflection, only black holes in the building, and lack of shadow lines of the roof.

[huzar]

hi

my advice

insert foto in the window, will be more realistic.

[vizwhiz]

Thanks for The comments and Ideas

 

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changes changes changes, changes changes changes

i am beginning To Think That my middle name is "david bowie"

 

will Try To fix up and repost after The weekend

my client is a registered architect from Australia

 

she gave me the photos, i could only use 1x of the 2

so everthing front and background is from the site and

 

There are about 22 "imagecels" Trees/shrubs mainly in between

the foreground photo (cut and paste) and the Bldg, somewhere

 

now it is Time To fix The Bldg, change and re-render

This is only a conceptual sketch There is no design yet

 

**

 

The Bldg faces North, but she wants SunLite on the Bldg Face

The Image of The mountain is actually looking South so The Shadows

 

are opposite of the Bldg lighting, the foreground is mirrored

and Then i Tried to fix it so That it doesnt look mirrored

 

Thanks

 

Randy