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Hi all! Just registered today, and looking through the WIP gallery here, I've got a lot of work to do! Nice work from everybody. In that vein, I'm posting my current project for crtique/comments. Obviously, it's a comp - I think the far house is looking pretty good, but the closest seems to have something... off. :confused: I've got until next monday to finish this, so I'm going to continue playing with it over the week, and any pointers/ideas/comments would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

 

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Hey Maxx, welcome aboard. first off, your camera matching is quite good, too bad the picture you have is kindof grim but we can only use what we have..right? Is that 3 houses there? Not sure if thats 2 on the left or one bigger one. I'd say the house on the right seems to me to be the most believable of the three but they all still look kindof out of place. ie: low contrast, maybe a bit blurry, the tree in front is a little distracting, etc. but for a comp it looks like you have the houses placed properly. Now is the fun part. countless light/material/shadow tweaks! Have fun. Post updates when you can.

-=rob

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raterry (rob) - thanks for the welcome and the kind comments! Yeah, unfortunately the picture is not exactly the best, but it's what the builder snapped. I can't really complain - gotta upgrade my own photo equipment.... It is 3 houses total, staggered on each of the lots by about 7 to 15 feet from front porches.

 

Thanks for the comments on contrast and blur - this is my first comp, so I'm kinda stabbing in the dark and it's nice to have somebody aim me in the right direction. I've been looking at the houses for about a month now and can hardly see them anymore :( Anyway, off to tweak and re-render, etc... I should have some more compo's to post in the next day or two - the project's due on Monday next week. So I'd better have something else done... :D

 

Again - thanks for the pointers and warm welcome!

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