Jelle Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 Hi C&c welcome on this. MAX and Vray. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJL Imaging Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 I think it looks great, I was just wondering if you could throw a little displacement or bump in the carpet. I'm not sure about the outdoor environment, the perspective of it looks a little skewed, would it be worth it to use some 3D stuff? or perhaps just a view that would match the scene better. Good job with the lighting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oyie Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 I agree with the carpet it looks like a cardboard, maybe you should change the pillow, but over all its a nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trhoads Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 The comforter on the bed looks too much like a large piece of sculpted foam. I thas no creases or folds, and it is taking away from the rendering which otherwise looks nice. The background could use some work, and maybe the plant needs a little more variation in color on the leaves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juan Altieri Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 i think the sunligth over the bed looks to sharp, try to use a little area shadow and the image will looks amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelle Posted March 9, 2005 Author Share Posted March 9, 2005 Alright thanks for critism You're right about the carpet and BG and light too :-) Not sure about the bed spread which it is meant to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minus Posted March 10, 2005 Share Posted March 10, 2005 I would put a Fresnel effect on the lamp. Right now it seems like it is uniformly reflective and that for me is making it jump out. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
William Alexander Posted March 10, 2005 Share Posted March 10, 2005 jelle, Take a look at the modeling on the door, needs some cleaning up- great render over all though WDA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelle Posted March 11, 2005 Author Share Posted March 11, 2005 So I've taking some into account for this update, changed the lighting situation. I know the BG isn't too good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
voltaire_ira Posted March 11, 2005 Share Posted March 11, 2005 very nice lighting! maybe you could adjust the bedsheet, it sould be resting on the bed cushion or frame. it seems to be being blown by some kind of breeze... nice texture on your bed!!! keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mohamedberry Posted March 13, 2005 Share Posted March 13, 2005 well... the light is much better, but some mistakes in the curtain intersecting with ceiling, vase on ground with carpet... i think there should be a handrail outside at the balcony, pillows are small (they are squares & they should be rectangles). nice work though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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