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[roland]

hi guys,

 

i need comments on my latest work

 

thank you,

[jucaro]

Pls post in the appropriate section of the forums.

This post is suited to be in the WIP section. Unless you are asking for 3DS Max specific questions.

[pmanahan]

Overall it is kind of empty, put in some tables and chairs, are their specific light fixtures you could use? The blank walls on the left are very distracting, if possible put some graphics on them or interesting color. Nice piece.

 

pmanahan

[Richard McCarthy]

I agree with others, it's kinda empty.

But before you put in other stuff, may I suggest the following?

 

1. Lighting. You need to really fix up your lighting. Light makes or breaks an arch rendering. That's why architect always talk about playing with light and shadow. Right now your images appears under lit, and it's very dark and kinda depressing.

 

2. You need to have a more dynamic camera angle, right now it looks and appears flat, it seems you point the camera straight at the sign and the shop appears to be just flat against the camera. Give it a more dynamic angle! Images needs to invoke the feeling of movement, dynamicism. Try to place a camera where I suggest it. (You need to adjust it on height)

 

 

3. From what it appears in the image, I gather you not sure what to do with the space to your left, so I suggest you crop it. If you think the space to your left is irrelevent and it is nothing interesting, crop it.

 

4. It need texture on the wall, and floor, and adjust the material on those surfaces, right now floor looks like glass to shiny.

[roland]

I agree with others, it's kinda empty.

But before you put in other stuff, may I suggest the following?

 

1. Lighting. You need to really fix up your lighting. Light makes or breaks an arch rendering. That's why architect always talk about playing with light and shadow. Right now your images appears under lit, and it's very dark and kinda depressing.

 

2. You need to have a more dynamic camera angle, right now it looks and appears flat, it seems you point the camera straight at the sign and the shop appears to be just flat against the camera. Give it a more dynamic angle! Images needs to invoke the feeling of movement, dynamicism. Try to place a camera where I suggest it. (You need to adjust it on height)

 

 

3. From what it appears in the image, I gather you not sure what to do with the space to your left, so I suggest you crop it. If you think the space to your left is irrelevent and it is nothing interesting, crop it.

 

4. It need texture on the wall, and floor, and adjust the material on those surfaces, right now floor looks like glass to shiny.

 

i will try what yuo say thank you

[roland]

Overall it is kind of empty, put in some tables and chairs, are their specific light fixtures you could use? The blank walls on the left are very distracting, if possible put some graphics on them or interesting color. Nice piece.

 

pmanahan

 

 

thank you i will make your suggestion