New Office Building

[trhoads]

This is the latest thing I have been working on. About a day in modeling, and half in rendering. Any comments would be greatly appreciated.

 

Thanks in advance.

[chuck]

i think for me the biggest distraction is the grass. maybe a slight noise modifier on the ground plane would help, maybe you should use a shot of some real grass and screen map it so the perspective is correct. the edges of the grass in the foreground needs to be mixed up, looks like a box. i've found that using the clone tool in photoshop with the "grass" brush helps me get some irregularities in there, just be carefull. its easier for me to work at high resolutions.

 

your glass reflections could use something more to reflect as well, and a more realistic asphalt map would help too.

 

other than that the materials look good, in proportion and well laid out. it would be nice to see a higher resolution though.

 

overall the scene looks pretty empty still, and i understand its still in progress. any signage going in? trees towards the front? i like to use a tree off camera to cast a nice shadow over part of the scene if possible, it helps break things up and makes me think the building has some context instead of sitting on a plane in space.

 

its looking pretty good so far...keep going.

 

chuck

[trhoads]

Since it is a WIP, I am posting the latest, hopefully I will get some comments. Still working on it, will be off and on. Comments are appreciated.

 

Thanks.