roland Posted April 5, 2005 Share Posted April 5, 2005 hi guys, Comments are welcome thank you, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arnold Sher Posted April 5, 2005 Share Posted April 5, 2005 Hi Roland, My biggest issue, besides the design of the actual place which i am sure you have no say over, is lighting... From the look of it this place looks like a deli of some kind however it looks really uninviting and dark, almost unapatising... Try using the same lighting rig that i have send you previosly. I think you need to tweak that and just add extra sparkle into it. Another thing that i think would make it "bounce" is extra added detail of the product in yuour display counters. Try throughing in couple of people to give some deapth. Also in terms mapping, in order to create a feel non repetiteveness try making some maps in photoshop with variable texture directions to give your tiling some life. Also i would try to move the camera to your right as i think in terms of your set up it is looking too head on and you are loosing your perspective... Hope that helps... Keep working at it, you are getting there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ecastillor Posted April 5, 2005 Share Posted April 5, 2005 Its ok to start, but the glass in the counter needs reflections and light inside...try lighting the lightboxes on the wall and reduce the tiling on the yellow brick Nice work keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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