roland Posted April 10, 2005 Share Posted April 10, 2005 hi, guys i need some comments on my latest work. thank you, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisHolland Posted April 10, 2005 Share Posted April 10, 2005 Hi Roland, Cool design man! Great illustration of the original outlook, nice atmosphere. Which render-engine did you use? Maybe you should adjust your camera (a little upwards) so people see more of the total counter + ceiling. I think your flooring needs more tiling and bump, lower your blur (0.3) in the material editor. Overall I think the image is too dark and it might be possible to solve that with level-adjustment in Photoshop to let the highlights stand out much more. Good job, Dennis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arnold Sher Posted April 10, 2005 Share Posted April 10, 2005 massive improvement from your last render... Well done...I agree with the previous comment, needs to go much lighter...Getting there there though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard McCarthy Posted April 10, 2005 Share Posted April 10, 2005 Hi Roland! Massive improvement, I see you have fix up the viewpoint quite a bit, but still, I feel you still need to fix up your lighting. The shop look like it's closed right now, you need to put lights on the SIGNS of the shop, the counter, and the walls behind the counter. Not to mention to the right of the counter as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roland Posted April 11, 2005 Author Share Posted April 11, 2005 Hi Roland, Cool design man! Great illustration of the original outlook, nice atmosphere. Which render-engine did you use? Maybe you should adjust your camera (a little upwards) so people see more of the total counter + ceiling. I think your flooring needs more tiling and bump, lower your blur (0.3) in the material editor. Overall I think the image is too dark and it might be possible to solve that with level-adjustment in Photoshop to let the highlights stand out much more. Good job, Dennis thank to all of you guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roland Posted April 11, 2005 Author Share Posted April 11, 2005 massive improvement from your last render... Well done...I agree with the previous comment, needs to go much lighter...Getting there there though... thank you ! dude your part of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roland Posted April 11, 2005 Author Share Posted April 11, 2005 Hi Roland! Massive improvement, I see you have fix up the viewpoint quite a bit, but still, I feel you still need to fix up your lighting. The shop look like it's closed right now, you need to put lights on the SIGNS of the shop, the counter, and the walls behind the counter. Not to mention to the right of the counter as well. thank you ! good bless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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