Exterior Residential Project

[jucaro]

Here's a WIP of a first of a series of renderings for a residential subdivision development.

 

comments and suggestions are welcome. Dont mind the paving.

[Iain Denby]

At the moment, it looks like a 1-5 scale cardboard model placed on a grass field. Too saturated too.

 

Keep working on it !

[bokkins]

ganda naman... mas maganda siguro yan pag natapos. maybe he means its too saturated for the background. fix the background and it will be fine.. good luck!

[IC]

maybe he means its too saturated for the background. fix the background and it will be fine.. good luck!

 

Well, yes and no. The building looks cartoon-perfect in total contrast to your photograph backdrop. For that kind of render to work, the backdrop has to be cartoonish also.

 

It need variation on the materials and colour desaturation to match the photo.

[jucaro]

Is this an improvement?

 

 

i'm still working on the paving and the road texture fronting the structure. Last will be the foliage

[Hozz]

well.. i have some comments on the design itself .. i think that the doors is too high i wonder why .. for me as interior designer its bad for the lil kids !

 

and the area between the doors and the arch is solid .. i guess if u use it as a colorfull glass window it will be luvly with the glass cubes beside the door ! oh same as the two sqaures up there !?

 

and maybe wht make the picture look cartoonish is the colors especially the roof tiles theres somthin not right there it looks plastic !

 

one last thing now the doors colors is brown but the whole windows and frames even the doors frame is white !!

[Da_RoCk]

Hello!!!

 

General info (refering to the architecture): SAD BUT TRUE, mid-residential architecture here in the philippines almost fully adapted the med-spanish style. On that note, most of the residential developments have adopted that candyland/cartoonish experience. Most of the color schemes comes down to either to warm... or probably too cartoonish as you have said. Eventually,almost all of the residential dwellings here is like that and those under development and being marketed in the local malls.

 

On another note, those roofs indeed exist in the local market. They are what we call here STYLE roofing or in common terms... simulated spanish clay tile on G.I. im not sure it is available abroad but here its accesibly available.

 

Too bad we dont have a control over the design and architecture of this project for we only work on the marketing side that deals on the presentation of what ever they give us. But as an architect myself, i really hope that they will able to re-think the color schemes that they have in mind as soon as they will be able to evaluate this vizualisation.

[STRAT]

hi m8, i hope you dont mind but i took the liberty of making it less 'artificial' looking imo.

 

[Tommy L]

The composition of the image aint great. Needs more space around the building . I would model more site stuff as well. I would also have the grass at the front of the building growing higher than the kerb. This will help integrate the cg. Still looks over saturated as well. Can you use a different photo, longer shot for instance?

[jtiscareno]

Is it me or does the model looks too small for the background image... The grass of the photo looks way bigger than the grass that you have on the rendered image. That is why probably it looks like it is like a model.