wsneto Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 Hey Folks! it´s my first image at all using Mental Ray. I´ve tryed so hard using displacement to make the grass but I didn´t get an satisfying result. If you have any comment our suggestion about this image, do it please. I really want to improve it. Thank you! Image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy Homeless Guy Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 to me it feels like you are over using logarthmic exposure control on the image. slightly redish pink, and blown out to much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marko_JJ Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 I think the shadows are good... but the white walls are too white i think.. maybe if u dirty'd up the textures abit , it would give a more realistic look.. is it suposed to be brandnew? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisHolland Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 Better sort that overexposed atmosphere out because the model is perfect for a very cool render. I like the design and the sun angle, it produces cool shadows right now. Just work on the exposurecontrol.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ch83575 Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 Check your UV maping on the dividing wall of the units. It looks so close to the brick of the facade that it seems like the same texture just stretched out. It almost makes it look like stone slab (ie. barcelona pavilion) but if that is the case I would change the color a little to make it not a perfect match with the brick. I would also try to make it tile differently if it is stone. The tiling in the street is also slightly distracting. Overall, great lighting and a very nice model. Going to be a great image! Chad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wsneto Posted April 25, 2005 Author Share Posted April 25, 2005 Hello Guys Thank you for your comments. I´m trying to solve the overexposure problem, but I guess it´s based on skylight. there goes an updated image. Fell yourself free to comment. Thanx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Would the road stones really be that small? Why no plants on the foreground left carport? It would add a lot. That center cloud could not be in a worse place. get rid of it. Leave the rest of the sky alone and clone out that cotton-ball hat your building is wearing. Otherwise--quite nice. The best touches are the white car and the furniture that matches the accent tone of the building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wsneto Posted April 25, 2005 Author Share Posted April 25, 2005 Hi Ernest, I´ve fixed the stones size already. And about the cloud, it really looks like the building is wearing a weird hair... hehehe I din´t noticed it, and I´ll fix it. Soon I´ll post an update. Thank you for your comments!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Oh, and one more thing--the plants could be darker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wsneto Posted April 29, 2005 Author Share Posted April 29, 2005 Hello Folks There it goes one more updated image. I would really apreciate more comments and sugestions. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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