Beach House

[mikacool]

Beach House, without beach jejejjej is only 5 minutes of the beach

[STRAT]

all your peeps are lit incorrectly

[mikacool]

what you mean with that?

 

help me, how I can gain more realism, i use v ray

[STRAT]

well, the lady on the ground - the sun is shining on her from the complete opposite angle as the rest of the model. people above - too illuminated.

 

also, the people look too un-naturally placed and not actually needed in the shot.

[antonio_frias]

I think your plants in front of the house are a bit too blury and that you should try changing the sky image for a light blue sky

[RODRI]

i don´t like the girl!! very nice the curtains but the glass...you have to check maps scale(the street, etc)...

[Jason Matthews]

I think everything is too bright. Maybe change the color mapping to exponential. I would change the size of the vray shadows so they are not so harsh. Make sure area shadows are checked.

 

All of the foilage is over exposed and the palms seem like they are blurred. Good looking glass and curtains.

 

I would also advise using a vray displacement map for the grass. It is too flat.

The texture for the road is too large. Scale it down and maybe add some extra touches in PS.

 

I hope this helps.

[mikacool]

Thanks, i try all that in orther to see what hapen´s