My last proyect and render

[Mike_VIZ]

This is my last building proyect and i rendered using for first time LVS, its very important to me your comments about the photo-realistic render.

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/gallery/image_spotlight.asp?fileName=tap

[DelfoZ]

El angulo de la camara no es el mejor, Pero imagino es un patio muy reducido. tal vez eso haga que se vea un poco irreal, Si hay mas espacio intenta no deformar tanto la camara para lograr un poco mas de realismo

 

buen trabajo

[quizzy]

hey delfoz....

 

english!!!!

 

and mike,

 

very nice rendering, but i'm not sure on the composition..

 

[ August 16, 2002, 01:23 AM: Message edited by: quizzy ]

[STRAT]

yeah, nice render and quite photo-real.

 

i'd personally question the reflections.

[nisus]

Hi mike_viz,

 

Here are some thoughts about your image. I'll also include some tips & directions to work in.

 

- the composition is a bit off, because you have an important vertical line almost in the middle of your image. A better way to setup important lines is to use the rule of thirds: divide your image in 9 parts, the sides of the most inner rectangle are very important for a dynamic balance: use them

- your image has strong parallax: it's a personal choice of course, but I don't like it too much. A better choise might be to use camera clipping, so you can take your shot from 'outside' the building.

By avoiding parallax, you'll also have a better focus on the sky, and you'll avoid the groundfloor, which lacks detail imho.

 

Not too much to comment on materials and lighting as composition is more an issue here. Hope it helps you out.

 

rgds

 

nisus

[DelfoZ]

Originally posted by DelfoZ:

El angulo de la camara no es el mejor, Pero imagino es un patio muy reducido. tal vez eso haga que se vea un poco irreal, Si hay mas espacio intenta no deformar tanto la camara para lograr un poco mas de realismo

 

buen trabajo

sorry, in resume i say to him, he need a better angle of the camera, isnt look real. but maybe the space are too little to change the angle.

 

good job anyway