WIP Municipal Building

[jucaro]

Hi all!

 

I'm quite sure this needs improvement, but i'm stuck wondering how.

 

Image was modeled in ACAD for 45mins, rendered in Max 4.2 with FinalRender at 1:15mins GI processing+rendering @ 4096x2048, Grass and some post-processing was done in photoshop.

 

Your valuable input would highly be appreciated.

 

[sanzpont]

Hi jucaro.. I will make some comments to the design itself:

 

I think your building is lack of proportion, Municipal Buildings should be more IMPONENT, I mean tall compared to a people... or maybe is just you don't have a humane scale in the image but grass let me see the proportion

Otherwise I konw that's a WIP, and you are on the way... keep it up

 

-=sanzpont=-

[Cesar R]

Hello Jucaro,

 

The frist thing I noticed is the reflection on the glass. they need to be toned down a little bit since they look almost painted. if you look around glass does reflect that much in many cases, as a matter of fact you may want to add some foliage and have it reflect on the glass. I would also try to add more contrast to the image by perhaps positioning the sun in a way that it would cast nice shadows (deeper and darker) specially against the small overhangs on your windows., but I am sure you already know this

Keep it up, i cant wait to see your next upgrade.

 

Oh another thing, .. I dont really like Finalrender (maybe bc i can't use it correctly) but I always get the same flat look... my 2 cents on your GI engine.. )

 

Hope this helps !

 

Cesar R.