Mike_VIZ Posted September 9, 2002 Share Posted September 9, 2002 HERE IS MY FIRST APROACH. Render in LVS Processing: 40 min. Rendering: 8 min. http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=patio.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAKA Posted September 9, 2002 Share Posted September 9, 2002 hey mike the overall lighting (except for the left wall which is overexposed) is good. Too bad the trees are blocking half of the image....scale them down. The sky doesn't fit here....add fog or a white gradient to it, to have a smooth transition. The Floor tiling looks fine (try desaturating ur map a little bit), and the soft reflections are great. Pool looks great, maybe a little darker (just an opinion). As for the glass, can't make a statement since i can see 1/3 of it (trees! ) Overall, great work for a first wip. But hurry, u only have till thursday.....good luck rgds. TAKA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest evrinc Posted September 10, 2002 Share Posted September 10, 2002 Couple of additional comments about the trees. 1. besides overpowering the image they are also out of scale for the size of the trunk - I believe these are the tops of much taller trees. 2. They're also twins - use 2 different trees when you only have 2 trees - a little extra work, but worth it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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