vermu Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Hi all I have done pretty much all the modeling there will be. It's just texturing and texturing. I'd like to hear what you guys think about this. Do you like the feeling and mood? Suggestions to make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris_Mac Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 This is fantastic!!!! Tell us a bit more about it: what software? plugins? Tell us about the project... who is it for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jucaro Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 four thumbs up!!! The mood seems that of a scene pulled out from "Shrek" Nice rocks. Where did you get the grass and foliage, or did you model them too? Maybe you might want to add volumetric light rays to accentuate the mood more. Thats just my opinion though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wojciech Klepacki Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Hi vermu, Very, very nice start. Fabulous image... LotR somehow. It's lot to be done but the image I can see is very charming (so to speak). Best regards and keep working. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vermu Posted December 18, 2002 Author Share Posted December 18, 2002 Thx for the nice crit guys. Chris_Mac: Scene is made with max3.1 + brazil beta. Skylight + one direct light for the sun. It's my personal project that I started when I had a little spare time at work. First I had just the gazebo and I tried many different locations/surroundings for it and then decided to go for a mediterranean feeling. jucaro: Tree and bush meshes are made with druid which I have textured. I made a few different grass blades and then scattered them around the pond. Volume light is a good suggestion. WK: You are not first one to say Lotr feeling I guess it has influenced somehow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eric Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Very nice! How about including all of the Garden House/Gazebo in the image, or at least try to include the top of the structure? The image has a very realistic feeling in the modeling, until the eyes cross over the tree protruding into the scene on the top left. The branch is very segmented and has a very fake look (unconvincing look). If it were me, I might try to find a better branch to stick in its place. Perhaps the water could be made to look a bit more realistic as well with more ripples or speckles, and more reflection. What about maybe some bedding plants in the bed that surrounds the structure on the left side of it? How about some chairs or a bench or two inside the structure? For a garden, it might really need more plants/flowers, and even some potted plants. Maybe clusters of pots in a corner somewhere. Just my thoughts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Griger Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Nice feel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vermu Posted December 18, 2002 Author Share Posted December 18, 2002 Eric, you basicly said my to do list Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tony Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Very nice! My only critique is the water, everything else is very well done. Beautiful textures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eric Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 My apologies Juha (Vermu). I read back over my post, and realized I probaly commented TOO much on it. It really is a very nice rendering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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