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Challenge#2 : SNH - WIP#1


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Hi !

My first test for this contest :

 

Rendering time 10 minutes.

cgarchi_01_640x855.jpg

Any comment are welcome.

i need to make a better lighting …

Thanks

SNH

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Bienvenue, monsieur! (sorry for my lousy french!)

You forgot to mention the rendering engine, software, time spent, etc...

Anyway, I think your image lacks some dramatic lightning, you know? I know this shot is probably a dawn one, just a second before the sunrise, but I'd use a 10 o'clock sun, to cast some shadows and make the radiosity work a bit. Then, your image won't have this "flat" feeling.

Anyway, great job!

 

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Hi !

Don't care for your french … :)

C4DXL

Fake GI.

12 Minutes

Need to work on this water & glass.

 

The light is better than the last …

 

cgarchi_02_600x800.jpg

 

Thanks for all comments.

 

See you !

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SNH

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Hi !

Thanks for your awnser.

(sorry for my bad english)

 

I have try another angle for the sun light. (for change a bit than the rendered image in the zip files)

My new images (2) are here (i put only the link, because 4 images by pages it's a bit bigger for small connection)

 

http://3dworkshop.free.fr/images/forum/archi/cgarchi_03_480x640.jpg

 

http://3dworkshop.free.fr/images/forum/archi/cgarchi_03_480x640_2.jpg

 

On this pictures, i have on spot light, and the radiosity do the the job.

It's more longer for the render … 25 minutes but not because of the GI, because they have a shader for have a blurry reflection on the floor. Look like more realist than a perfect reflection.

I hope you like it more … :)

Oh yes i have forgot the bumps on the water, sh*it !!! ;)

 

So wich one is the best ?

Maybe the two picture are a bit to saturated … i will try some other setting.

 

Thanks. See you !

 

SNH

:rolleyes:

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