Challenge#2 - quizzy - Wip#1

[quizzy]

If you know what time it is let me know... Its wierd but I like it.. needs more lighting details, and more water in the corners and some things in the holes... but for now its "okay"...

 

P4 1700 MHZ/768MB/MAX4.26/1h30min render time

 

[kid]

you should see the sun in the sky given the angle of your shadows, but it's always tricky shooting into the sun anyway.

 

Did it really take 1 1/2 hours?

 

I think it needs a tree, it helped mine.

[nisus]

Hi Quizzy,

 

To be honest I don't like it so far. I guess it's because the composition is so much based on halfs instead of thirds: half of the image is dark, the other half is light, the treshold right into the middle...

 

I'd go for another camera-setup, but keep your silhoutte-like approach to lighting the scene.

 

rgds

 

nisus

[Ricardo Eloy]

Hey, there!

I think it looks strange...I know it's a WIP, but maybe this time is not a good choice, you know? If it was a frame from an animation, I'd say it would be OK, but for a still, it's not clear... I looks like it's 6 o'clock in the morning, and it's not helping. Try changing the time, that may help...

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Rick

[quizzy]

okay you are all very right, so I made some dramtic changes in color and time, also changed the composition a little... the left picture is without a volume light, which drastically adds to the render time...hmmm.. and the right one is with a volume light, but i think that one is alittle bright...

 

well here it is: