Single house - upmarket area

[Stan Zaslavsky]

here is one for you comments

 

its a small townhouse in a suburban area that is a little more upmarket

so we tried to simulate features like ashlar lines through the paintwork and extra features on the porch

 

i had to bring in the model from Revit - so that too a lot of work cleaning up as i mentioned in another thread

 

look forward to your comments on how we can improve further

[Ky Lane]

Modelling looks solid - composition is a little cramped; can you move out a bit? It looks a little vertically elongated? Go wider. - textures need some detail to them and the lighting needs alot of work, but its a great start!

[Stan Zaslavsky]

Hey Ky,

 

thanks for the feedback - client wanted this particular view so can't do much there.

 

what are your suggestions re lighting?

 

 

cheers,

[Ky Lane]

Id up the exposure alot. Looks gloomy. What renderer/lighting system are you using?

[SandmanNinja]

Hi mate,

 

I agree with ky.

 

This is a house on a clear day with bright sun and clear skies.

If you're using MR, I'd use Shutter speed of 1/125 or 1/250 and f/7 or f/8

 

Nice looking house - you'll have to give me some pointers on exteriors, mate...

[skala67]

yes definitely work on your lighting. There are some good exterior lighting MR tutorials online now.

 

Also the siding on the house looks a bit out of scale unless it is a different type of siding than i am thinking of.

 

keep up the good work.

 

cheers

[Horhe]

The angle looks odd, between an aerial and eye point of view - it would be easier and less time concuming to make the image eye level - then there would be no need on filling the horinzon line with buildings and vegetation - works especially if your client did not provide you with the situation of the site or the neighbouring surroundings are tedious to model.

[ankit4d]

Roof looks flat, you can add bump to make it more realistic.