3D House Exterior WIP

[jameson101]

Here are 2 renders of my current work,

Could anybody please advise on the look and feel of these images.

If you would like me to take a screen shot of my settings please let me know.

I used Vray fur for the grass, it looks good in the front but the back it is to spread out, I will change that soon.

 

Any advice is welcome

[Dave Oliver]

have you considered a more dramatic lighting situation? your materials are white, and the sun is right overhead, so there is a lot of washed out white.

 

bad grammar:

if you throw the sun down at an angle, give it a warm color, and have a cool color for the environment, and have some reflection on your materials. you will pick up the warm and cool colors on planes that face different directions. also you will get some specular highlights - if you save these as a separate channel you can also play with them in photoshop.

 

looks like your bump map is applied too large

[manish_mv]

Yeah

 

absolutely I agree to Mr. dave may be one more thing you can ry that is occambient occlusion and multiply it over your render image in photoshop

 

try this 4 tutoraial on vray ambient occlusion

 

[jameson101]

Hello all,

here is an update of the back of the house.

ANy advice or comments welcome, if anybody has an idea of anything to add to the scene or any other settings I should use please let me know.

Thank you

[irwan2ho]

I think you have done a great job rendering exterior..

But may be control of lighting and depth of field are still less..

otherwiase , in overall you a great man...

May I know your lighting and windows glass parameters??

Hope we can keep sharing in future..

Thanks..

irwan2ho@yahoo.com

[manish_mv]

Yeah it is a better one just few suggestions:

 

1 the water is not looking natural at al decrease the size of the wave the water has

 

2 the glass on the balcony is making your scene a cg. folow a more real glasss material

 

3 try to change the colour of umbrella instead of white it is merging.

 

thanks

[innerdream]

Good start. You have a problem with scale it looks to me. The gentlemen holding hands will not fit through the doors on the left, those doors also look lower than the doors on the right.

[Claudio Branch]

 

Any advice or comments welcome, if anybody has an idea of anything to add to the scene or any other settings I should use please let me know.

 

 

Nice effort thus far, but here are some areas I see needing attention:

 

Modeling - your building will greatly benefit from chamfered edges

 

Lighting - image has low contrast making it appear flat...check Exposure Control settings

 

Camera Angle - too high off the ground...needs to be lower to help scale

 

Foliage - 2d trees really stand out...too much saturation. Considered going all the way -3D?

[jameson101]

Thanks all for commenting,

I will be working on it this week so please come back and comment again.

It will be much appreciated.

Have a great day everyone:)