lobby of clubhouse

[chow choppe]

please crit the following render

still working on the staircase detail

and why is my glass on g floor so shiny. looks like metal. how to make that glass material?

 

Also can u give me ideas regarding the central raised floor where i have all the furniture. my brain got freezed after trying various options so i put the same material as lowermost flooring.

 

please help me improve this

 

thanks

[natysoz]

i like this kind of lighting but dont u think its too much hard?

 

also the stairs really scary to claim littile children or ppls like me can fall

 

 

do u work with Cad files from Architect?

[chow choppe]

i like this kind of lighting but dont u think its too much hard?

 

also the stairs really scary to claim littile children or ppls like me can fall

 

 

do u work with Cad files from Architect?

 

Yeah i think its too hard and yellowish right now. but i ahev changed it now

Stairs are architects design:-(

yes all the drawings are provided by the architect

 

hers an update. Almost final

 

Thanks

[Nic H]

looks good i reckon

lose the 3d people though, the woman mid stride is bad.

[cadmunkey]

I'd also have a go a producing it in portrait format too aswell as landscape. I feel like I am missing out by not seeing the bottom bit of the oval.

[Dave Oliver]

the railing/wall thing that comprises the oval is just a bit hard to read because there is no discernible cap on it. wouldn't there be some kind of wood or solid surface cap? since it looks like just a half-height wall.

[amer abidi]

I actually prefer your first image over your last. It's cleaner, easier to read, has more vibrant colour, contrast and depth. I would retrace my steps if i were you =)

[STRAT]

I actually prefer your first image over your last. It's cleaner, easier to read, has more vibrant colour, contrast and depth. I would retrace my steps if i were you =)

 

 

agreed. the first feels so much more satisfying.

[Stan Zaslavsky]

agreed - except the staircase in the second is a lot safer

[chow choppe]

i agree

 

i also like the yellow lighting of the first image

but the client felt as if its giving too luxurious look to the space and making it look like a hotel lobby which is not the case as it will be used by general public .

So i toned down the yello from the image. The contrast was achieved by photoshop. That i can still get if i rework in photoshop on the new image.

 

Thanks guys for the comments.

 

Good to see that there are not too major changes required into he image and i am improving :-)

[easy3dsource]

I like where this image is going. I think the reason your glass is so reflective is due to the viewing angle between your camera and the glass surface; I believe this is an effect of using fresnel reflections; if you stand perpendicular to a glass surface, you can see straight through it... the more parallel your viewing angle is to the surface, the more strongly you see reflections. I would adjust the fresnel reflections setting to change this. I may be wrong; but i remember in a previous project I set the fresnel reflection setting in the material to 1, and it made it act completely transparent from all angles. This may or may not give you the look you wanted, as it may appear that there is no glass there at all.