giraffe Posted March 13, 2004 Share Posted March 13, 2004 I need your c&c to improve this image. the architectural design does not belong to me so please make your crits on the cg work. the material on the pergola cover, is the choice of the architect... but I am unhappy with it-it should be something like bamboo so I made this material using gradient ramp. it is standard lighting- fakosity. thanks in advance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe Posted March 13, 2004 Author Share Posted March 13, 2004 sorry forgot to attach the image: http://www.elifserencioglu.com/wip_ks.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingeldar Posted March 13, 2004 Share Posted March 13, 2004 it's nice but there's two things i can see that could be better to improve image first the pool looks like it's 0,50 metters deep the tiles seem to be very close to water afraids me... wouldn't jump init... lol second think is that the images looks a little 'whity' maybe add a few color saturation or something modelling looks nice maybe u could add some 'parasol' (sunshade?) so peops who are afraid of suburnt & skin cancer will be hapy... ps (thx for the mail) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skogskalle Posted March 13, 2004 Share Posted March 13, 2004 hey giraffe! I like the water, although I agree with kingeldar that the pool doesnt look deep enough, and there should probably be 15-20 cm from the water-surface up to the "ground level". Your background trees are more desaturated than your 3d-objects, so maybe you could give the background some more color in photoshop, or desaturate the rendered objects. the ground-tiles closest to the camera looks very nice and real. the "pergola cover" -material doesnt look good, but you already know that. maybe if you found good bamboo-texture instead of the gradient it would look better? or if you modeled each bamboo-stick? Then it would be easy to add some imperfections to it, (it looks too perfect now). overall a nice image! just needs some tweaking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chad Warner Posted March 13, 2004 Share Posted March 13, 2004 I like the tile at the bottom of the pool, but I think the grout in the tile closest to the camera is a little rough looking. -Chad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe Posted March 15, 2004 Author Share Posted March 15, 2004 thanks for the comments the pool is 160cm deep. I think it seems to be shallow only because of refraction I will work on the bamboo-like pergola covers and post the new image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ciberarte Posted March 16, 2004 Share Posted March 16, 2004 Why does anybody swim in that pool? You could try a diferent point of view, like from the pool adding some little waves, you could try also use diferents objects at diferents distance (like chairs) put some people in the nearest chair and in the pool to reach more depth. Another think, what time is it in the picture?, you have light like noon with sunset shadows :$. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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