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[abdulkarim]

This image is rendered in only 9 hours total from modeling to rendering.

[neil poppleton]

9 hours seems a long time, but all dependant on your experience. Interesting low angle.

[abdulkarim]

yeah it is. But my system (Laptop) is not so good. it is HP Compaq 8510w with 4GB RAM and NVidia Quadro 570M graphics. and off course im not so much experienced.. BTW thanks for your comment

[Victor Erthal]

Hey Abdulkarim,

 

I think what the image lacks is contrast. everything is bright. including the shadowed areas. I would try and get some levels adjustment in photoshop. Also, the greens need to be more "equalized" throughout the scene. I know that, in reality, plants tend to have pretty different shades of green depending on the species, but it makes a lot of sense for artwork to have the greens in a closer hue range. The camera angle is interesting, but could improve for example in the general way in which the building gets framed. You could use a little bit more room on the top of the frame so that you show the whole top of the building and then some sky there. The sky could use some variation, seems to be a flat color now. try and add a gradient at least.

These are just the initial thoughts i would change in it, but i understand how time constraints go.

I hope this helps.

[abdulkarim]

@victor

thanks a ton for your valuable suggestions. I was also not happy withh the color tone of the image. but can u do it for my learning plz. correct the image and send me through mail or post here plz

my mail id is abdulkarim.salahuddin@gmail.com