antoniogarcia Posted March 9, 2014 Share Posted March 9, 2014 Studio/Institution: AarkitecturaClient: NFOGenre: Commercial ExteriorSoftware: 3ds Max + Vray + PhotoshopWebsite: http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/Description: Hello everyone! Here my last work. It´s a hotel + wine museum in Croatia. The project was made for the office NFO (Zagreb) in 2010. I have done two view. I like the first one more, with which I think I have improved my skills a bit. The second is ok, but I think there is a bit mistakes that I don´t know how to get it better (maybe the imagens that I have used to create the enviroment). I will continue practicing ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt McDonald Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 I don't understand the decision to make the first image so dreary. Was it requested by the client? It just seems to me that if you want to render a place that people are going to want to go to, it should be bright and folks should look like they are having fun not freezing cold. The second image looks a little brighter but is there person without a shirt on in the image? That's pretty distracting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antoniogarcia Posted March 10, 2014 Author Share Posted March 10, 2014 About the first imagen, I think it isn't dreary. Some partners told me that it is a cheerful image and I think so. Maybe the renders to backlighting is a bit stranger, but I want to emphasize the form of house with this ilumination and fill the square with shadows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 There are very specific things going on that make it dreary. 1. figures are isolated and grey - the largest one is looking down and looks depressed 2. you have these greyish - brownish plain buildings that are all the same and give a general impression of having no windows. That creates a feeling of dreariness. 3. most vegetation is the same kind and desaturated color and trimmed to exactly 24". I think all this lack of variety is creating a depressing ambiance. (like even the roofs are the same material as the walls (visually) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antoniogarcia Posted March 10, 2014 Author Share Posted March 10, 2014 Ok about it is details. I am amateur and I have to improve more and more, I am in this world less than one year. But I think is not so much dreary. Maybe I need to habituate my eyes to see this mistake. The next time I will try to think in all this thing and to do the imagen more attractive. About the project, this was for a competition in 2010 and I took it to practice my skills. And of course, I could have been better about roofs, woods, windows, form, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 (edited) Looks pretty good for only having 1 yrs. experience Edited March 11, 2014 by heni30 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antoniogarcia Posted March 10, 2014 Author Share Posted March 10, 2014 Thank you for your help. I think I have a long way :-) but with the practice I think that I will get better imagen. I will use all this tips. P.D.: I am from Murcia (Spain) and Of course Paco de Lucia, the best guitarist of spanish guitar ... a pity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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