Marcelo Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 Hello, this is a part of a work I'm finishing this week. Crits and comments, please. Software: Form-Z 3.8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelfoZ Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 more sky, less street whats is the left element ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
salf Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 what delfoz said.....and add windows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marcelo Posted December 3, 2004 Author Share Posted December 3, 2004 thank´s guys, the left element is the stairs´ volume. I did not understand the advice "put some windows"... Do you mean put some reflection or trasparence in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ricardo Eloy Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 Hum... your composition looks really odd to me... As Delfoz mentioned, you see a lot of pavement, but cut the building, making one only wonder what's going on there. Take your camera target a lot higher, show the staircase volume, let us see the rest of the building (it's being cropped both on the right and left). I also missed the singles. The roof looks too clean, toy-ish, imho. You might as well mess with the lighting, too. A sun, casting strong shadows, bringing the volumes up with some more contrast. My 2 cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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