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Hum... your composition looks really odd to me... As Delfoz mentioned, you see a lot of pavement, but cut the building, making one only wonder what's going on there. Take your camera target a lot higher, show the staircase volume, let us see the rest of the building (it's being cropped both on the right and left).

I also missed the singles. The roof looks too clean, toy-ish, imho. You might as well mess with the lighting, too. A sun, casting strong shadows, bringing the volumes up with some more contrast.

My 2 cents.

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