marckie258 Posted December 4, 2004 Share Posted December 4, 2004 hi! this is my latest work. still W.I.P. C & C's are welcome. rendered in 3dsmax 7 - Vray MARK CENIZA MAC Studio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted December 4, 2004 Share Posted December 4, 2004 *good job! just dont like the floors, too much reflection on it and the lampshades, these are turn-on but doesnt cast lights and shadows.. *way to go man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anvaraziz Posted December 4, 2004 Share Posted December 4, 2004 hey nice work.. dont u see that,the exterior through doors dont look nice, put some plants or remove the wall n put a nice background Pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marckie258 Posted December 4, 2004 Author Share Posted December 4, 2004 hi sherwin, anvar! I totally agree with you guys about the floor, lampshade and the background. in fact, i'm adjusting it right now. anyway i will post an update of this later. Thanks... MARK CENIZA MAC Studio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marckie258 Posted December 4, 2004 Author Share Posted December 4, 2004 here's an update. render time: 4 hrs. on 800 x 600 still need to hear your suggestions guys. MARK CENIZA MAC Studio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted December 4, 2004 Share Posted December 4, 2004 These people drink right out of the bottle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marckie258 Posted December 4, 2004 Author Share Posted December 4, 2004 These people drink right out of the bottle? still doing the rendering. i will post the update with a glass later. thanks Ernest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da_RoCk Posted December 4, 2004 Share Posted December 4, 2004 Hi markie... seems that everything reflects alot, its not a bad thing but i suggest that you work with the reflection. In addition, the lighting is a bit strange... the lamps doesnt seem to contribute to the over condition. Example, from what i see is that your scene is still lighted by your sun. the natural lighting in my opinion should be not be that intensified, instead your lamps should be the one doing the job. Overall its a good start. please feel free to correct my suggestions. Regads to all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jodestroy Posted December 4, 2004 Share Posted December 4, 2004 What kind of floor is it? If it's ceramics, we should see each tile a bit différent in the shade, and a bit of noise too. your recessed on the ceiling seems to be too big. It should be around 4" diameter. And the main problem we all have ( i too ) is the chrome .... Too clean. No scratch, too reflective... I'm sure that your rendering time grow 4 times with this material Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marckie258 Posted December 5, 2004 Author Share Posted December 5, 2004 Jodestroy, Da Rock... thanks guys for all your comments and suggestions. all are noted. i will post an update later. MARK CENIZA MAC Studio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Island J Posted December 5, 2004 Share Posted December 5, 2004 The lights arent working, you might want to consult an electricain jus kidding seriously though, are those lamps really lights or are you just making the shades illuminate? The bar needs some work, it looks very uncomfortable. No place to put your feet and no where to lean over and put your arm while telling the bar tender your life story. These two things are crucial. Also the bottle of Jack looks alil fat. And wouldnt you want different lights--perhaps pendants over the bar to make it seem a lil more special? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nangkri Posted December 5, 2004 Share Posted December 5, 2004 nice works, give some bump in the map give image like concrete, and turn in down the poin (default is 30), thats to make the floors morre intersting. but so far so god. sorry about my english best regards nanang Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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