Interior Render

[Brayan Gomez]

Hi , this is a new job that I do, and I would like to receive a bit of feedback.

 

Edited May 25, 2020 by Brayan Gomez

[Thomas Edward Allen]

Really cool Brayan. It might be a nice effect to have the light coming in the window even softer and more of a blue like a night shot. A dusk HDRI would be great for that. You could then add a downlight subtly illuminating the artwork as well.

[Scott Baumberger]

This is a very good start. And, the previous comment is a good suggestion as well.

Just a few things to work on. Overall the image is still pretty noisy - I would work on the render settings, or just let it render for longer. I find the color of the chair distracting - it goes from green to yellow which is a bit odd. Color bleed on the wall is a bit excessive from the chair as well. Perhaps desaturating it would help, as everything else in the image is quite muted. The magazine in the chair looks a little too contrived.

Could also increase the DOF effect / lower f-stop to help focus on the table & chair. A tiny amount of texture / variation on the wall would make it more interesting as this surface occupies a lot of the image's "real estate".

Another thing that might help is to indicate activity off-camera: something very subtle in the glass reflection, just a spot of color or light coming from the left. This could make the scene feel bigger than it really is. Think about the use of the space, or maybe introduce a small story to the image. What time of day is it? Maybe I just got home from work and there is a drink on the table? Or, maybe it's morning time and a steamy cup of coffee? These elements can bring the whole thing to life. Hope that helps, hope to see what you come up with!