Da_RoCk Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Hello everyone... Happy new year to all... This is at the earliest stage of the preliminaries of my current project. This is not much though... thanks in advance for the c&c. Sorry about the quality. directly ripped from a hi res render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kicks Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pmanahan Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Looks really good. My only suggestion is to add details to the gate. Right now it looks like a fence the cars are trapped behind, all in one piece. pmanahan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bully712 Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Looks Great! I agree with pmanahan.... One option might be to open the gates slightly.. also, it seems like there should be a pier in the middle of the gate ( in front of the tree ) for support.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iain Denby Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 It has an indoor feel about it, kind of like a TV studio set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy Homeless Guy Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 i think i agree with dibbers. i think the overall feel has a yellow tyinge to it, kind of like you would get with incadescent lighting. it lacks the freshness that the ourdoors would have. the sky needs pumped up, and even though the trees have leaves, they feel fake because of the yellow tinge. also, the deep darkness of the windows can be fine, but it feels like there is nothing on the other side. kind of like they are an empty box. but again, this is just one persons feeling. if it feels right to you, keep pushing it, but it doesn''t feel quite comfortable or inviting to myself yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anvaraziz Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 wow... nice work.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da_RoCk Posted January 6, 2005 Author Share Posted January 6, 2005 Hello everyone... yes it has a yellowish feel into it. im still experimenting with the mood though. ill try to put a blueish tint into it and i guess that whats you guys suggest and thanks. Regarding the gate, i definetly agree. try to put details on its mechanism and will post updates. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CVC Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 Hi DaRock , i like ur work but i can't see the shadow of tree ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lhanh29 Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 Good working ! Da_RocK !!!! I think CVC judged about shadow of trees It's right But i think it is not important to much. I really like you working,house's color is good.I like it.Just my opinion!hope you fun ! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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