dimitrilucy Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Studio/Institution: Personnal workGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds maxDescription: Hi all, I'm new to the forum, this is my first post. I am here because I found this portal and I've seen a lot of professionals and highly skilled artist and very talented. That's why I'd like some feedback and criticism on my picture .. Thank you in advance .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ismael Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 The left half is excellent but the right half, overblown in the details is boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tron Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 Check the scale of your doors. Are those 7'? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitrilucy Posted June 18, 2012 Author Share Posted June 18, 2012 thanks you Ismael for the left half To the right is the exposure that you find it too strong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitrilucy Posted June 18, 2012 Author Share Posted June 18, 2012 This is not doors, it's windows. it's my apartment I'm doing. Windows is 120 centimeters high and it is the first floor. ps, sorry for my english I hope you understand me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kenanavci Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 I see what you're trying to do with those blinds and it really gives the place a living area mood. But since we see the shiny wood floor in front of the right window and you have a pure white carpet and a table there it simply overexpose. You can switch the blinds places, very simple solution. Like left one opened, and the right one closed. Fits in real life situations too, you can not see a thing on the TV like that so i bet you never open that blind in mid-day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ismael Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 "To the right is the exposure that you find it too strong?" dimitrilucy Yes, what does it showcase? Is that you and your camera gear in the avatar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitrilucy Posted June 19, 2012 Author Share Posted June 19, 2012 (edited) Here is another image with a totally different light and some details improved. I had a lot of criticism about the lighting that was not correct so I reworked and I have improved a bit the ground and I reversed the blinds What do you think? PS : still lacking a lot of shaders and object in the scene because it's wip Yes that's me on the avatar why? Edited June 19, 2012 by dimitrilucy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ismael Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 Like this update. I was just wondering if you were a photographer/cinematographer or any other go-pher. Why, because I like to see people versed in such endeavors as to how they work their renders, from geometry to materials to lighting to rendering and to post-working. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitrilucy Posted June 20, 2012 Author Share Posted June 20, 2012 I'm really sorry but I don't understand what you want Charis huang ? I don't understand your question.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koldo Posted June 26, 2012 Share Posted June 26, 2012 This is definitely AMAZING.... _______ 3D RENDERING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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