What could've been improved?

[Krisztian Gulyas]

Hi, good day to you!

This is my latest image, so i thought you could tell me what could i change/improve in my next render (or what to do with this one). Thank you in advance

(3ds max+vray)

[Ismael]

I personally would lose the table and showcase details like the fine carpet you have there and the sofa's.

... my 2 cents.

[John Dollus]

I'd suggest exploring composition a bit more in your next render. technically, it looks fine but the purpose is not clear.

[Chris MacDonald]

Get rid of the table and light, they both look quite poor up against the sofa and carpet. Create more interesting lighting, there are currently no shadows really indicating where light sources might be? The texture on the wall looks almost like a plywood texture that's been scaled up enormously.

[salvador]

Agree with the compositing process. The lighting overall is great but the render looks a bit flat. Find some techniques about using render passes in PS to correct colors and add dramatic effects on renders. This is not an add, but Alexander Vasiliuk's tutorials are very good for this part. (google it)

 

Good job!

[Krisztian Gulyas]

When I saw the final render, i thought something's wrong, but couldn't tell what so thank you all for the answers.

Edited September 18, 2012 by krisztiangulyas