andstef Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 Studio/Institution: studio AEClient: privateGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds max, vray, photoshopWebsite: http://studioae.roDescription: Helo! I would like to know your opinion about this image (a rendering form one of my interior design projects), what would you do different, what can I improve. rendering done with 3ds max and vray - saved to jpg, a little color balance and contrast in Photoshop. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Beaulieu Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 I can't focus on anything, but the rolled camera angle and the fish-eye lens. Things look decent, but it's tough to tell. I feel like in the end, without the camera effects, the image might be really boring, content-wise. If you straighten the camera and use a common lens, I would suggest that you try and put together a morre design-y look to the furniture and overall decor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 Light is too big. Looks like an industrial warehouse grade fixture. Like you would need dark glasses just to be in the room once it got turned on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andstef Posted January 7, 2013 Author Share Posted January 7, 2013 Thank you for your feedback, all the best! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris MacDonald Posted January 7, 2013 Share Posted January 7, 2013 I agree with the first comment, and I'd like to add that the lighting is fairly bland - just being lit by an overcast/neutral outdoor light. I can't help but feel the rear of the room needs more light, it feels dark and forbidding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andstef Posted January 8, 2013 Author Share Posted January 8, 2013 Thank you for the feedback. I now realize I feel the same about the lighting, but at the time I didn't know exactly what was lacking. The more "design-y furniture" is not for this project. Since I designed it according to client's desires and budget, this is as design-y as it's going to be for this project. I'll try to play with the lighting thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meherthakker Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 True..the light looks kinda big..but overall nice render !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xEndlessxUrbiax Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 The brick wall needs to have an actual brick pattern, and have bricks of the correct size of proportions at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andstef Posted February 16, 2013 Author Share Posted February 16, 2013 (edited) Thank you for the feedback, I played with this scene in the past weeks, and here is the result: another link to the image I adjusted the brick... a little... i find the "tiles" map to be limited and looked for an alternative to stone-placement-tools but was not able to create the bricks to the size and proportions i wanted (all the bricks to be the same size). Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate that you took the time to write a comment. "See" you later! Edited February 16, 2013 by andstef Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xEndlessxUrbiax Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 Looks good, especially that brick The rug is really well done, you might think about moving the furniture around a bit so we can see more of it. The tv could be bigger, as it lies ina rather large area of the wall, also there is no cabling which leads me to think the cables go behind the bricks. I'm definitely nit picking here. I think the image is a success. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andstef Posted February 18, 2013 Author Share Posted February 18, 2013 Thank you! In reality the cable for the tv will be visible, it would have been rather complicated to hide inside the wall (a plaster wall in front of the existing concrete one, and there was no time and budget for this). Maybe I'll post a picture of this interior after it's finished (the furniture should be ready by the end of the month). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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