Michael Pickard Posted December 7, 2017 Share Posted December 7, 2017 Studio/Institution: MichaelGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: 3DS Max, VRay, PhotoshopDescription: Hi there I'm currently working on a street scene which has 2 new properties on it. I am in need of some feedback as i just think its not to the level i want it to be at and would love some advice on where i am going wrong in the image. Any advice on the areas I could improve on, or any areas that you feel let the scene down? Thanks Michael Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted December 7, 2017 Share Posted December 7, 2017 It feels very life-like, natural. But it also looks like an amateur photo. I think the problem lies in the composition and the choice of sun angle. If your client is hellbent on a day shot then I'd swing the sun around to the left more, give your subject a lit side and a shaded side. It will punctuate the geometry of the building better. Can you lose some hedge? If you are permitted, make it a dusk shot. Blue and orange, blue and orange, blue and orange..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michael Pickard Posted December 19, 2017 Author Share Posted December 19, 2017 Thanks very much, that advice has helped a lot. Played around with the sun position and it has given it a much better look. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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