gfa2 Posted November 3, 2008 Share Posted November 3, 2008 Not sure about the tight crop in this latest image. Back up a little and let the building breathe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fourthand11 Posted November 6, 2008 Share Posted November 6, 2008 Take a couple steps back. Try locking down the shot first. Think like a photographer might and treat the building with respect to its surroundings. Then focus on a light source and materials with glossy reflections and such. vrayexpert.com??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frosty Posted November 6, 2008 Share Posted November 6, 2008 vrayexpert.com??? Hehe, I thought the same thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ankit4d Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 vrayexpert.com??? I bought this Domain name 2 years ago...Hope to become it one day... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 Hey man great improvement to your work...Though i prefer the image before it was cropped...keep up the good work u seem to be a fast learner. And my 2cents:...lots and lots of environmental observation....just study real life photos and compare it to your renderings... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Sugden Posted November 10, 2008 Share Posted November 10, 2008 I think the glass i the building could be worked on. The windows look like mirrors at the moment with no depth to them at all. I would try making the glass completely transparent, perhaps adding the reflection in Photoshop instead by creating a matte material for your glass and exporting an alpha channel. So you can control the reflection completely. Or failing that just tone down your reflection in the glass material. I think getting depth on the inside of a building by more transparent glass can add a lot. I would also consider trying to 'dirty' up the facade a bit. even if the building is a plain rendered finish, it would benefit from a little weathering, maybe near the pavement, under overhangs. Subtly is the key here. Again, you could simply do this in photoshop with the exposure brush controls. Also I think you pavement could have a little more deviation in the texture, so it looks a bit more natural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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